The speeding vessel, nudged by the stealth
Of an iceberg giant, looming out of the shadows
Of dangerous night, and the vulnerable flank
Splintered, where the Atlantic Ocean
Poured its drowning fire through
The punctured lung, the bridge
At first lightly jolted, the course unchanged,
It seemed, yet strangely enigmatic,
Light-hearted revellers on the dance-floor
Celebrating in opulent style,
Afterwards the flood of abrupt terror
Through their shrinking world
Driving them on in savage flight
To cram deficient exits,
The orchestra taking up the stark theme
Of God's proximity, this myopic
Vainglory of fools with power and influence
Making its final maiden voyage,
Disregarded in extravagant haste,
The ship's captain holding in his conscience,
The lack of rescue-boats on deck,
And the coming dread for those he carried,
Helpless before the onslaught of the storm,
No altered denouement in this drama,
Nor sudden hope to escape the throes of death,
The unsinkable ship vanishing
Over the foaming edge of inevitability,
With the few surviving the dark, oil-soaked horror,
To prolong their living
As those reborn for guilt and gratitude.
Bill Drayton, Christchurch
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