The cows were posing for a photograph
when they left off eating. I herded them
out of their vacancy, mud slapping at
their heels. The day was Christmas cold, burning
red in the west; birds, going home,
silhouettes
The one tree for a mile looked petrified.
You couldn't stand the loneliness of the field.
Your craving was the rush hour and from the dawn
we squabbled like gulls over seed: the
scarecrow
a distant spectator in the window,
who you'd always point at and say that's you.
I'm glad you went. There's room to rest
my legs
and when the fire's warming my backside,
I suck on humbugs that my auntie sent.
Geoffrey Loe, Shirley, Southampton
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