We looked out from Carn Brea
near paths we had trod,
chips of Cornish granite
made feet feel barely shod.
In the misty distance
lay Atlantic coast,
below us were tin mines
Now monuments at most.
We looked as if forever,
nothing seemed amiss,
on this balmy evening
we snatched a fleeting kiss.
I have never seen her
since we left that hill,
Celtic maid entrances me
Her voice haunts me still.
Graham Lawes, Sholing, Southampton
Daily Echo writer-in-residence Polly Clark, pictured, writes: "A romantic verse by this poet, with a song-like rhythm."
You can e-mail Polly on polly.clark@soton-echo.co.uk
Don't forget the Daily Echo short story and poetry competition! Details in Saturday's Creative Corner.
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