When the boat moves gently in the yellow crystal ripples
Side stare askance to the living light.
Stand off this leeward shore to see the crafty sun
Draw tight its golden prisms.
Space singed rays scoot on curling leaves
Then smear a lifting brush across the harbour sea.
View a single line of ebb turned shingle pressed
Towards a high-jacked copse of remnant forest trees.
Hold that sear of landscape before a gravel course
Of western hail whips the fooling velvet surface
Into a lacquered coats of dimpled films.
From the shed grey clouds white dot tines
In fluted sheets obscure the reclaimed fields.
A silvered flash through clearing shrouds stuns
A hawthorne bush to print a fleeting shadow mark.
This blacktailed tangle reaches for the ships
And morbid cranes and claws their metal frames
To sink beneath the greasy waves.
Ian Ellis Chandler,
Sholing, Southampton
Echo poet-in-residence Polly Clark writes: "Lots of description in this densely-packed poem.
"I really liked 'greasy waves' - a great image."
You can e-mail Polly on polly.clark@soton-echo.co.uk
Comments: Our rules
We want our comments to be a lively and valuable part of our community - a place where readers can debate and engage with the most important local issues. The ability to comment on our stories is a privilege, not a right, however, and that privilege may be withdrawn if it is abused or misused.
Please report any comments that break our rules.
Read the rules hereComments are closed on this article